literature

the breakup

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I took your heart and tore it in two.
You said ," I love you!" I said,"yeah, me too!"
I left you behind without a care
while I went out and partied else where,
And then, one night, I did you wrong,
I met someone and stayed out too long
When I got home, the house was bare
I looked around and could find you nowhere
Thats when the reality of things set in,
I realized what a fool I was cause
Baby, you are a blessing !!!
So, here I am in the pouring rain,
Trying to win your love again,
You looked at me with a tear in your eye,
You turned you back and said,"goodbye!!"
Now, Im left here, cold and alone,
Empty inside because you are gone......
* this is my cousins poem not mine*
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DrWafu's avatar
This is good, but a few lines in that sort of slash at the general mood of the poem.
Tell your cousin that. ^^